Love - lost and found!  

Posted by lafemmereva in ,

I am a girl and you are a boy
Your job is to be cute and mine is to be coy

It was love at first sight
And between us there was never a fight

I always called you day and night
To hear your voice that put away my fright

Long distance never ever made us part
We shared everything between us from start

Every night I sent you my kiss and hug
Which made you sleep cozy and snug

With time however you started to love her more
And the strains in our relation increased it's score

You craved to see her first on hearing the cock doodle
And I had to be happy just playing the second fiddle

Fear of losing you to her crept in me
Depressed and lugubrious i started to be

It was time to salvage our waning relation
It was time to come to face with the painful revelation

I came hurriedly to see you after almost a year
On seeing your indifference to me I shed a tear

I tried to show you how i was always there
With all your love now only for her, you didn't seem to care

I had let distance come between us honey
Because my work commanded me to travel far for money

She comforted me saying you will learn with time
That i was also yours and you were also mine

Because you are too small to understand that I am your aunt
And though I yearn to love you more than her - your mother - I can't

I leaped in relief for she was my best sister and your most loving mother
And you, she and I will make an absolutely fab trio together!!!!

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Brilliant ..... !! Can easily be a writeup for a professional card !!

Also reminds me of the ancient dialogues ... "Tumhare pass kya hain?", "Mere pass ma hain !!" :)

March 19, 2009

Love this!!!
Particularly the twist in the end, when you revealed who "he" was.

March 19, 2009

Oh and yes what a bang sixer to commemorate your 50th post ... !!!

Its been a brilliant half century ... !! Looking forward to another 50 !!!! :)

March 19, 2009

I was looking for the twist...

March 19, 2009

hahah!! Luci!!! yes that line , MTV used it to spice up many ads :P

March 20, 2009

Thanks Manju :)

March 20, 2009 intelligent...of course u will - the girl with the roving eye and vigilant mind!! :)

March 20, 2009

Nice twist to the poem! loved the climax :)

March 20, 2009

Nice twist to the story :) Loved the climax!

March 20, 2009

:) Babe, You are awesome!!!

March 24, 2009

Ush - So are you!

April 04, 2009

I yearn to love you more than her - your mother - I can't

this was very cool... the unknown lady the mystery and the relevation in the end.. nice plot..

i would love if u put more figures of speech in your poetry... metaphors similes etc...

nice work keep going!

April 06, 2009

nice....didn't understand the 2nd part english is weak...
(trying to picture Kurt cobain singin it with his strat....:) )

May 23, 2009

Danke Parv!

June 19, 2009


Kurt Cobain...My god....!! He is God!!! brilliant he is!!!

June 19, 2009

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