I am a girl and you are a boy
Your job is to be cute and mine is to be coy
It was love at first sight
And between us there was never a fight
I always called you day and night
To hear your voice that put away my fright
Long distance never ever made us part
We shared everything between us from start
Every night I sent you my kiss and hug
Which made you sleep cozy and snug
With time however you started to love her more
And the strains in our relation increased it's score
You craved to see her first on hearing the cock doodle
And I had to be happy just playing the second fiddle
Fear of losing you to her crept in me
Depressed and lugubrious i started to be
It was time to salvage our waning relation
It was time to come to face with the painful revelation
I came hurriedly to see you after almost a year
On seeing your indifference to me I shed a tear
I tried to show you how i was always there
With all your love now only for her, you didn't seem to care
I had let distance come between us honey
Because my work commanded me to travel far for money
She comforted me saying you will learn with time
That i was also yours and you were also mine
Because you are too small to understand that I am your aunt
And though I yearn to love you more than her - your mother - I can't
I leaped in relief for she was my best sister and your most loving mother
And you, she and I will make an absolutely fab trio together!!!!
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15 comments
Love this!!!
Particularly the twist in the end, when you revealed who "he" was.
Oh and yes what a bang sixer to commemorate your 50th post ... !!!
Its been a brilliant half century ... !! Looking forward to another 50 !!!! :)
ha....
I was looking for the twist...
hahah!! Luci!!! yes that line , MTV used it to spice up many ads :P
Thanks Manju :)
saya...my intelligent...of course u will - the girl with the roving eye and vigilant mind!! :)
Nice twist to the poem! loved the climax :)
Nice twist to the story :) Loved the climax!
Ush - So are you!
I yearn to love you more than her - your mother - I can't
this was very cool... the unknown lady the mystery and the relevation in the end.. nice plot..
i would love if u put more figures of speech in your poetry... metaphors similes etc...
nice work keep going!
nice....didn't understand the 2nd part though..my english is weak...
(trying to picture Kurt cobain singin it with his strat....:) )
Danke Parv!
@Michael
Kurt Cobain...My god....!! He is God!!! brilliant he is!!!
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